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How technology has changed schools in your country over the past 20 years?

How technology has changed schools in your country over the past 20 years? eelWO
Education is based on the construction of the future and with it, the time is modified. The main factor of the education evolution is the progress of technology and how it affects it. These modifications are the reality nowadays. For example, the internet has become the source for all the students and people in general, because with one click you are able to read millions of articles and information on all types of subjects. But, this progress does not appear in one day, these changes appeared in schools since the ending of the 20´s century. Technology changes everything, even the way of teaching and learning, it also opens opportunities, especially for today's youth. Before the digital revolution in Mexico, teaching was based on the use of pencil, paper, and books. These artefacts were the tools of teaching and with it the evaluation comes. The methodology that was implemented was the one where the professor gave the theory, the students took notes and then an evaluation was carried out, and with its results the learning process was certified. 2000 is the year when technology started to take place in the world and began its evolution. This year technology has not had an impact on education because the people were just adjusting to it, so only the school administration was a part of the change. By 2005, in Fox's presidency, the government started to introduce technology into schools, changing the traditional way of teaching to the new method called “Encyclomedia”, it consisted of technology as a tool of teaching. But, this new program does not succeed because the professors were not trained for this change. In 2000 neither a change was seen. In 2010 many technological advances happened, one that shocked the entire world was the iPhone. These advances change the technology perspective because by that time you could have the technology in your hands. As a result of it, and with the new implementation of technology in 2005, the progress started to appear. By 2008, the scholars had already dominated the understanding of technological education. The problem was that between public and private schools the level of technological education was different due to the different conditions among them. Since 2010 a lot of changes have happened, as a result, in 2015 the educational system passed from Encyclomedia to the Projective Model. This new program consisted of an education based on projects and evaluations. In 2020, the technology changes the way of teaching as never seen. The classroom passes between a desk and a pencil to a camera and a computer. All these changes were made due to school needs. Besides it, the transformation affected millions of people with low resources being forced to stop educational progress. In my opinion the technology was the only capable of modifying the education methodology, and it brought a new era of learning and teaching. This change has been clearly seen over the years, as well at its benefits as well. I think that this evolution is making children self-sufficient and it opens an opportunity for them to be more capable at solving problems.
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Education
is based
on the construction of the future and with it, the time
is modified
. The main factor of the
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education
evolution is the progress of
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technology
and how it affects it. These modifications are the reality nowadays.
For example
, the internet has become the source for all the students and
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people
in general
,
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because
with one click you are able to read millions of articles and information on all types of subjects.
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But
, this progress does not appear in one day, these
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changes
appeared in
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schools
since the ending of the
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20´s
century.
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Technology
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changes
everything, even the way of
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teaching
and learning, it
also
opens opportunities,
especially
for
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today
's youth.

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Before
the digital revolution in Mexico,
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teaching
was based
on the
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use
of pencil, paper, and books. These
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artefacts
were the tools of
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teaching
and with it the evaluation
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comes
. The methodology that
was implemented
was the one where the professor gave the theory, the students took notes and then an evaluation
was carried
out, and with its results the learning process
was certified
.

2000 is the year when
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technology
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started
to take place in the world and began its evolution. This year
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technology
has not had an impact on
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education
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because
the
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people
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just
adjusting to it,
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so
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only
the
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school
administration was a part of the
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change
.

By 2005, in Fox's presidency, the
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government
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started
to introduce
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technology
into
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schools
, changing the traditional way of
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teaching
to the
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new
method called “
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Encyclomedia
”, it consisted of
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technology
as a tool of
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teaching
.
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But
, this
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new
program does not succeed
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because
the professors were not trained for this
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change
. In 2000 neither a
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change
was
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seen
.

In 2010
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many
technological advances happened, one that shocked the entire world was the iPhone. These advances
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change
the
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technology
perspective
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because
by that time you could have the
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in your hands.
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of it, and with the
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new
implementation of
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technology
in 2005, the progress
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started
to appear. By 2008, the scholars had already dominated the understanding of technological
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education
. The problem was that between public and private
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schools
the level of technological
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education
was
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different
due to the
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different
conditions among them.

Since 2010
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a lot of
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changes
have happened,
as a result
, in 2015 the educational system passed from
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Encyclomedia
to the Projective Model. This
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new
program consisted of an
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education
based on projects and evaluations.

In 2020, the
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technology
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changes
the way of
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teaching
as never
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seen
. The classroom passes between a desk and a pencil to a camera and a computer. All these
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changes
were made
due to
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school
needs.

Besides
it, the transformation
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affected
millions of
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people
with low resources
being forced
to
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stop
educational progress.

In my opinion the
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technology
was the
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only
capable of modifying the
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education
methodology, and it brought a
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new
era of learning and
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teaching
. This
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change
has been
clearly
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seen
over the years,
as well
at its benefits
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that this evolution is making children self-sufficient and it opens an opportunity for them to be more capable at solving problems.
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IELTS essay How technology has changed schools in your country over the past 20 years?

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9 paragraphs
518 words
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