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How popular are electric cars in your country? Why? Why not?

How popular are electric cars in your country? Why? Why not? jdO9p
In my country, electric cars aren't that popular among people because existing cars have popular demand. However we have major weakness at developing the production of electric cars which I believe it mostly refers to economic sanction. Based on the advantages of electric cars such as reasonably price, eco-friendly and using renewable energy there are so many issues that we should face to catch on. Then and only then there will be a possibility that electric cars came into widespread use in Iran.
In my country,
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However
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electric
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cars
which I believe it
mostly
refers to economic sanction. Based on the advantages of
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electric
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cars
such as
reasonably
price, eco-friendly and using renewable energy there are
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issues that we should face to catch on. Then and
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then there will be a possibility that
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cars
came into widespread
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use
in Iran.
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IELTS essay How popular are electric cars in your country? Why? Why not?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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