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Describe your ideal workplace

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My ideal work environment would be one that is very structured. I like to work in a setting in which everyone’s responsibilities are clearly delineated, including my own, and I am made aware of the quality of my work will be evaluated. In my ideal work environment, everyone knows their role and has a place within the organizational structure. ’‘I have had to work from home for the last year. During that time, I found that I was very productive when I could set my own schedule and working at my own pace, with a minimal amount of supervision. Therefore, my ideal work environment would be something very similar. ’
My ideal
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environment would be one
that is
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very
structured. I like to
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work
in a setting in which everyone’s responsibilities are
clearly
delineated, including my
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own
, and I
am made
aware of the quality of my
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work
will
be evaluated
. In my ideal
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work
environment, everyone knows their role and has a place within the organizational structure. ’‘I have had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
from home for the last year. During that time, I found that I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
productive when I could set my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
schedule and working at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
pace, with a minimal amount of supervision.
Therefore
, my ideal
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work
environment would be something
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very
similar. ’
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IELTS essay Describe your ideal workplace

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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