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How much is number of arrests per year for using illegal drugs from 1991 to 2005?

How much is number of arrests per year for using illegal drugs from 1991 to 2005? LqxgR

In 1991, the number of arrests for illegal drug use stood at 55. However, over the following two years, there was a sharp fall to 20 per year. The number then rose significantly from 1995 to 1996 to 50 per year. 1996 to 1999 saw a fluctuation in the arrest rate, which was followed by a sudden increase at the end of this period, with the rate reaching a peak of 80 in 2000. Next, the number of arrests plunged to a low of 15 in 2001. It remained stable for the following year, but then increased gradually to 20, leveling off at this rate for the remainder of the period.

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IELTS essay How much is number of arrests per year for using illegal drugs from 1991 to 2005?

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