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How much an important person social status and material possessions in a life

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Twenty first century people widely addict with new technologies. simple example is very one has smart phone and that phone already installed the social medias. Therefore, people very fast make a relationship with each to others. Social media platform is very much close and reduce the distance gaps in a human. Hence young age group between 20-35 most addict drugs therefore very limited of time period they make bond. Therefore youngers does not have good honour, kindness and trust.

Twenty first
 century This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
widely
 addict with new technologies. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSimple
simple
 example is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 one has smart phone and that phone already installed the social medias. Therefore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a relationship with each to others. Social media platform is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much close and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the distance gaps in a human.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 young age group between 20-35 most addict drugs therefore
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 limited of time period they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 bond. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
Possible spelling mistake found.youngerloungers
youngers
 does not have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.honor
honour
, kindness and trust. 