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How many meals do you have every day.

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Like other peple, I have 4 meals during a day-big breakfast, lunch, snack and light dinner. As you know, breakfast is the most vital part of a meal. This is mainly because It supplies us energy from morning. So it must be rich in nutritions. I always try to do on time. I usually consume some bread with butter, a cup of black tea with sugar, pancakes which are made by my mother for breakfast with my loved ones at home. Lunch is the second important meal of the day. I eat homemade meals, such as boiled rice, roasted chicken, steak for lunch. I personally believe that lunch should be very nutritional. However the dinner should be light.
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breakfast, lunch, snack and light dinner. As you know, breakfast is the most vital part of a
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nutritions
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bread with butter, a cup of black tea with sugar, pancakes which
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ones at home. Lunch is the second
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, such as boiled rice, roasted chicken, steak for lunch. I
personally
believe that lunch should be
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IELTS essay How many meals do you have every day.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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