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How important education in our life

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Education is most weapon in the world that through change everything in the world. Education is the wider terminated. It's given us many facilities that through which we live simple and happy. What is education? How to use education? Why we need education? How to use education in our life? These questions seeing easily, but find difficult. I think education means to help each other and solve their own problem, doubt and give confidence. Time accordingly changes education means system and structure. Education depends on the situation. Afriki Former president Nelson Mandela says to '' education us most weapon in the world that through will be change world. Education to provide each child's responsibility and duty for each parent. Our constitution provided each citizen education is essential and includes in part 5A.
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everything in the world.
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each other and solve their
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problem, doubt and give confidence.

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means system and structure.
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Afriki
Former president Nelson Mandela says to ''
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us most weapon in the world that through will be
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change
world.

Education to provide each child's responsibility and duty for each parent. Our constitution provided each citizen
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is essential and includes in part 5A.

IELTS essay How important education in our life

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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