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Consequences of free tuition for everyone at university

Consequences of free tuition for everyone at university L38w6
Consequences of free tuition for everyone at university. First of all, students will live depend on university. If they fail they don't need to pay; if they study well, they don't have a reward. Second, the university won't have funds to build and repair if it's damaged. In other words, they must have much money to upgrade equipment and infrastructure to serve students' learning and repair when it is damaged. Finally, should only be free for some special cases. Such as students with difficult family circumstances, students with disabilities to they reducing the burder about financial. Free university tuition won't bring high quality of training because free stuff will not be of good quality
Consequences of
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free
tuition for everyone at
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university
.
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First of all
, students will
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live
depend on
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university
. If they fail they don't need to pay; if they study well, they don't have a reward. Second, the
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university
won't have funds to build and repair if it's damaged.
In other words
, they
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must
have much money to upgrade equipment and infrastructure to serve students' learning and repair when it
is damaged
.
Finally
, should
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only
be
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free
for
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some
special cases. Such as students with difficult family circumstances, students with disabilities to
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they reducing
the
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burder
about financial.
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Free
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university
tuition won't bring high quality of training
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because
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free
stuff will not be of
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good
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quality

IELTS essay Consequences of free tuition for everyone at university

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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