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How has globalization had an impact on food and eating habits in your country

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Globalization plays a vital part in the development of Vietnam. The impact of globalization on language and film industry come along with the reasons that are the key factors that will be explored in this essay. The first change is language, which has been very important for Vietnamese culture. Formerly, ancestors claimed the preservation of national and cultural values attached to language. Therefore, they turned down other commonly spoken languages in order to preserve national identity. Until recently, citizens have a high level of proficiency in some kinds of language such as English, Chinese and Korean because of multinational industries going up. If employees do not encounter language barriers, they will have a good promotion opportunity in their work for multinational corporations. One glaring example, these days, global companies have an English proficiency target for their workers due to a professional working environment, which has to fulfil some requirements from foreign partners. Overall, globalization contributes to cultural diversity, especially the wide variety of languages. Globalization also has influenced the film industry, which has a significant difference between movies nowadays and those around 35 years ago. Historically, movies were mostly in black and white results in unappealing to the majority of consumption. However, currently in movies, there are more visual and sound effects. Fast and furious, for example, which is a movie extremely engrossing that attracts an enormous audience. Moviemakers have taken advantage of developed tremendously in technology to produce more stunning films. In addition, the entertainment industry obviously receives investment from foreign capital sources, which is one of the reasons why the situation continues to develop. In general, this is a significant change that helps Vietnam movies modernize. In conclusion, thanks to globalization, Vietnam has become a developed country in the field of film and language diversity. I believe that in most cases of globalization, it brings a number of various benefits for each sector in some ways
Globalization plays a vital part in the development of Vietnam. The impact of globalization on
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language
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industry
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along with the reasons that are the key factors that will
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in this essay.

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language
, which has been
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important
for Vietnamese culture.
Formerly
, ancestors claimed the preservation of national and cultural values attached to
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language
.
Therefore
, they turned down other
commonly
spoken
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languages
in order to preserve national identity. Until recently, citizens have a high level of proficiency in
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some
kinds of
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language
such as English, Chinese and Korean
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because
of multinational
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industries
going up. If employees do not encounter
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language
barriers, they will have a
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good
promotion opportunity in their work for multinational corporations. One glaring example, these days, global
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companies
have an English proficiency target for their workers due to a professional working environment, which
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has to
fulfil
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some
requirements from foreign partners.
Overall
, globalization contributes to cultural diversity,
especially
the wide variety of languages.

Globalization
also
has influenced the film
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industry
, which has a significant difference between
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movies
nowadays and those around 35 years ago.
Historically
,
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movies
were
mostly
in black and white results in unappealing to the majority of consumption.
However
,
currently
in
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movies
, there are more visual and sound effects.
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Fast
and furious,
for example
, which is a
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movie
extremely
engrossing that attracts an enormous audience.
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Moviemakers
have taken advantage of developed
tremendously
in technology to produce more stunning films.
In addition
, the entertainment
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industry
obviously
receives investment from foreign capital sources, which is one of the reasons why the situation continues to develop.
In general
, this is a significant
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change
that
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helps
Vietnam
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movies
modernize.

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In
conclusion, thanks to globalization, Vietnam has become a
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developed country
in the field of film and
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language
diversity. I believe that
in most cases
of globalization, it brings a number of various benefits for each sector in
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some
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ways
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IELTS essay How has globalization had an impact on food and eating habits in your country

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  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
6.0
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