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How far do you agree that computer is curse?

How far do you agree that computer is curse? OMPyM
The computer is advanced electronic device which has contributed to overall area of society. Since the application of such technology, the human beings have experienced the convenience in modern busy life. For this regard, the computer exists as the blessing in pandemic. As a matter of fact, the global mobility stops without internet in such a critical situation of coronavirus infection. By contrast, the computer is also curse if it goes for unethical purpose but this is fault of human beings, not technology. In spite of drawback of computer, it can be utilized in fruitful way through ethics.
The computer
is advanced
electronic device which has contributed to
overall
area of society. Since the application of such technology, the human beings have experienced the convenience in modern busy life. For this regard, the computer exists as the blessing in pandemic. As a matter of fact, the global mobility
stops
without internet in such a critical situation of coronavirus infection. By contrast, the computer is
also
curse
if it goes for unethical purpose
but
this is fault of human beings, not technology.
In spite of
drawback of computer, it can
be utilized
in fruitful way through ethics.
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IELTS essay How far do you agree that computer is curse?

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