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How does technology impact our life?

How does technology impact our life? WE75k
The importance of Technology in humans life is increasing day by day. The invention of technology has made human life much more easier. Technology has many advantages. It saves your precious time. It helps you to communicate with your friends and relatives easily using various applications. With the help of internet, you do learn a lot of things very easily. Technology has also helped students at the time of this pandemic where they were able to learn online. Technology also has many disadvantages. Nowadays there is increasing use of mobile phones which cause damage to eyes. Students get distracted from the studies and spend their times in chatting. They don't improve their personal skills as they are busy wasting their time in mobile phones. Thus, technology has many advantages as well as disadvantages so it is in our hand to take the advantage of technology and learn better things or to just waste the time.
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in humans life is increasing day by day. The invention of
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has made human life much
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advantages. It saves your precious
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. It
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you to communicate with your friends and relatives
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help
of internet, you do learn
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students at the
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of this pandemic where they were able to learn online.

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disadvantages. Nowadays there is increasing
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of mobile phones which cause damage to eyes. Students
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distracted from the studies and spend their
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in chatting. They don't
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improve
their personal
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as they are busy wasting their
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in mobile phones.

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IELTS essay How does technology impact our life?

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155 words
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