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how do you use medium for learning and relaxing

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Medium is a place to read articles on the Internet. A medium like a blogging platform, like WordPress or Blogger in Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, … which update news very quickly. I usually use the medium for exchanging information with my teachers, my friends. Currently, universities also update important information on social networks every day. So if I want to search for more information about the university in which I am interested, social media is a good place. In my free time, I also spend a little time surfing Faceboo or chatting with my friends. Medium is both a place for me to entertain and a place for me to study
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to read articles on the Internet. A
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for exchanging information with my teachers, my friends.
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important
information on social networks every day.
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if I want to search for more information about the university in which I
am interested
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or chatting with my friends.
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for me to entertain and a
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IELTS essay how do you use medium for learning and relaxing

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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