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How do you describe your friend or best friend?

How do you describe your friend or best friend? eb7yJ
All the people in the world have friends, including me. As far as I can tell, friends are part and parcel of many people's lives and I am so lucky because I have 3 best friends, but I just tell one, it is Phương Thảo. Her appearance is good-looking, she is short-sighted like me, she has an oval face, medium-height, white-skinned, dove eyes, broad forehead and straight nose. Thảo is cute, humorous, friendly and good at Chemistry and Physics. She is my best friend because sometimes, when I feel downcast, stressed, or disappointed, and she will always be there to support me face the cataclysmic situation. She can bring about happiness and accompany me through thick and thin. Or, when I need her to confide in, she'll share with me, empathize with me and give me the best advice at that time. So, for me, Thảo is a shoulder to cry on when I am in need.
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. Her appearance is
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-looking, she is short-sighted like me, she has an oval face, medium-height, white-skinned, dove eyes, broad forehead and straight nose.
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is cute, humorous, friendly and
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, or disappointed, and she will always be there to support me face the cataclysmic situation. She can bring about happiness and accompany me through thick and thin. Or, when I need her to confide in, she'll share with me, empathize with me and give me the best advice at that time.
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IELTS essay How do you describe your friend or best friend?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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