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How can we do more to protect the environment

How can we do more to protect the environment WEaEk
Well, that’s a hard question. It is clear that the planet we called home is facing many environmental problems, some people is trying their best to stop the global warming and some just simply don’t care. In the past few years, we've found a number of solutions to help prevent environmental pollution, some more effective than others and with science developing day by day, we might discorver many other effective ways to protect the environment. The government should realize about the effect of plastic on the environment and make less plastic, or they could invest more money in eco-friendly technology, this might not guarantee to work but it should do something. As to us citizens, i think that we should take the time to look around us, look at what we cause and start helping for a better future
Well, that’s a
hard
question. It is
clear
that the planet we called home is facing
many
environmental problems,
some
people
is
trying their best to
stop
the global warming and
some
just
simply
don’t care. In the past few years, we've found a number of solutions to
help
prevent
environmental pollution,
some
more effective than others and with science developing day by day, we might
discorver
many
other effective ways to protect the environment. The
government
should realize about the effect of plastic on the environment and
make
less plastic, or they could invest more money in eco-friendly technology, this might not guarantee to work
but
it should do something. As to us citizens,
i
think
that we should take the time to look around us, look at what we cause and
start
helping for a better
future
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IELTS essay How can we do more to protect the environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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