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How caan improve interests about freedom fighter

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Nowadays, young generation are like tke morden knowledge and also movie thaught. few crowd belief that morden people know about letest music and film stars but they do not like knowledge about historical freedom fighters of their nation. there are several reasons and solutions of this view that will be discussed. For this reasons, most of students thaught about only school result grade and percentage rather than gaining knowledge. The internet can improve understanding and also achieve study grips but youngster do like take knowledge only morden film Heroes and pop singer. The youths are influence by celebrity because newspaper and e-media saw only about film and morden person. Looking the solution, school and government should help of improve grip about our country freedom fighters and also prestigious people. First, management of country should include syllabus related to historical people so students can study about it and they can improve internet. morever, school can organised historical drama, celebrate freedom fighters days hence people will award about other knowledge. Furthermore, film director and movie producer should be created historical film. solo film in which main role releted freedom fighters life so more youth attracted of this film. To sum up, young people can more interest be created by history reading, by film, etc. I think our freedom fighters knowledge is more important rather than hero and pop person because all this person are proud of nation
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morden
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knowledge
and
also
movie
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thaught
.
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few
crowd belief that
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morden
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people
know about
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letest
music and film stars
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they do not like
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knowledge
about
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historical
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freedom
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fighters
of their nation.
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there
are several reasons and solutions of this view that will
be discussed
. For
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this
reasons,
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most of students
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thaught
about
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only
school result grade and percentage
rather
than gaining
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knowledge
. The internet can
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improve
understanding and
also
achieve study grips
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but
youngster do like take
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knowledge
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only
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morden
film Heroes and pop singer. The youths are influence by celebrity
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newspaper and e-media
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saw
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only
about film and
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person. Looking the solution, school and
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government
should
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help
of
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improve
grip about our country
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freedom
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fighters
and
also
prestigious
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people
.
First
, management of country should include syllabus related to
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historical
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people
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so
students can study about
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it and
they can
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internet.
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morever
, school can
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organised
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historical
drama, celebrate
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freedom
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fighters
days
hence
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people
will award about other
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knowledge
.
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, film director and movie producer should
be created
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historical
film.
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solo
film in which main role
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releted
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freedom
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fighters
life
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so
more youth attracted of this film. To sum up, young
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people
can more interest
be created
by history reading, by film, etc. I
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think
our
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freedom
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fighters
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knowledge
is more
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important
rather
than hero and pop person
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because
all
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this person are
proud of
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nation
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IELTS essay How caan improve interests about freedom fighter

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
234 words
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