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food is much better than before. Do agree or disagree ? Why?

food is much better than before. Do agree or disagree? Why? 6dwrl
With consistently changing of the whole world, everything is gradually being transformed and energeticcally evolved. Food would be no exception which is much better than before by some eope regarded. In my view, i just halfway agree with that because of mutiple reasons. Firstly, food are more and more diversified by the creativity of human nowadays, however it has been brought the high-level values of nutritions and made sure their quality to all consumers. As an illustration, chicken was not only processed with general tradition, such as cooking, steaming, making soup, but it is also adjusted and added to unusual ingredients to create novelty and to be prevalent in current trends, such as chicken shakes cheese, chicken cream sauce and so on, which is attract a lot of children, especially is student. In addition, sometimes we need to look at the drawbacks of it. Technology and society has been swifly advancing, retailers always find the proficient way of trading their foods to markets effectively and manipulating shoppers by using man-made chemicals to enhace the quality of their food. As you know, if you utilise heavily it, it may accumulate carcinogens that is not beneficial for our health at all. And therefore, i think we should weigh carefully to select and then buy food that you feel safe for.
With
consistently
changing of the whole world, everything is
gradually
being transformed
and
energeticcally
evolved.
Food
would be no exception which is much better than
before
by
some
eope
regarded. In my view, i
just
halfway
agree
with that
because
of
mutiple
reasons.
Firstly
,
food
are more and more diversified by the creativity of human nowadays,
however
it has
been brought
the high-level values of
nutritions
and made sure their quality to all consumers. As an illustration, chicken was not
only
processed with general tradition, such as cooking, steaming, making soup,
but
it is
also
adjusted and
added
to unusual ingredients to create novelty and to be prevalent in
current
trends, such as chicken shakes cheese, chicken cream sauce and
so
on, which is
attract
a lot of
children,
especially
is student.
In addition
,
sometimes
we need to look at the drawbacks of it. Technology and society has been
swifly
advancing, retailers always find the proficient way of trading their
foods
to markets
effectively
and manipulating shoppers by using
man
-made chemicals to
enhace
the quality of their
food
. As you know
, if
you
utilise
heavily
it, it may accumulate carcinogens
that is
not beneficial for our health at all. And
therefore
,
i
think
we should weigh
carefully
to select and then
buy
food
that you feel safe for.
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IELTS essay food is much better than before. Do agree or disagree? Why?

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