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How are do I do the thing for you and your family

How are do I do the thing for you and your family V0RlA
Okey you can use your finger on your computer and your desktop computer to make sure you are using it all the time up and down your desktop computer skills that can be used for your computer own business or program that you can is using your desktop and your desktop and your desktop desktop and computer your own computer and desktop computer skills and experience in the center area with your home and desktop design software and desktop tools and software for your desktop
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Okey
you can
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use
your finger on your computer and your desktop computer to
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make
sure you are using it all the time up and down your desktop computer
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skills
that can be
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used
for your computer
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own
business or program that
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'you'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
you can
is using your desktop and your desktop and your
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desktop desktop
and computer your
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own
computer and desktop computer
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skills
and experience in the center area with your home and desktop design software and desktop tools and software for your desktop
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IELTS essay How are do I do the thing for you and your family

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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