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Household Internet Access

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In 2008, around 15% of the urban households had internet access but less than 5%of the rural homes had access to internet. In 2009, there was a huge increase in the number of urban homes with internet from 15% in 2008 to 30% in 2009. However, the rural homes only saw a slight increase to 5%. Over the next two years urban homes gained 10% each year, reaching 50% overall in 2011. Meanwhile, the number of rural homes getting internet access is also increase 5% each year reaching 15% overall in 2011. The rate of urban homes getting internet access slowed down in 2012 and 2013 only climbing around 5% in the two years but the number of rural homes getting internet access has exponentially grown climbing 10% each year.
In 2008, around 15% of the
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households had internet
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but
less than 5%of the
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rural
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homes
had
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access
to internet. In 2009, there was a huge increase in the number of
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urban
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homes
with internet from 15% in 2008 to 30% in 2009.
However
, the
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rural
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homes
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only
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saw
a slight increase to 5%. Over the
next
two years
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urban
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homes
gained 10% each
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year
, reaching 50%
overall
in 2011. Meanwhile, the number of
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rural
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homes
getting internet
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access
is
also
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increase
5% each
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year
reaching 15%
overall
in 2011. The rate of
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urban
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homes
getting internet
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access
slowed down in 2012 and 2013
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only
climbing around 5% in the two years
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but
the number of
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rural
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homes
getting internet
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access
has
exponentially
grown climbing 10% each
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year
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IELTS essay Household Internet Access

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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