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hosting International sporting events justified or not.agree disagree?

hosting International sporting events justified or not. agree disagree? y7yeV
It is often argued that hosting sporting events on an international scale is not justifiable to some countries while for others it is an ideal opportunity. This essay agrees that countries who are capable must host these events. Firstly, these events can be organised by the countries which are developed. In other words countries that are capable and have enough resourto organise such events on a large scale. Whereas countries which are underdeveloped shouldn't be taking such risks, it would be worthwhile for financially secured countries. Such events give the hosting events an opportunity to showcase their hospitality and a chwnce to gain respect. Secondly, countries who lack or want to increase tourism can also make use of this opportunity. Along with the participating athletes many people from various nations visit the country to checkout these events. This works as an ideal opportunity to promote the tourist attractions and local cuisines, arts and crafts, anything that is uinque to them. This is also a golden opportunity to attain foreign direct investments by showing what they can be offered and their gains. To conclude, such events must be organised by nations having the capacity and wanting to promote tourism.
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argued that hosting sporting
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events
on an international scale is not justifiable to
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some
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countries
while for others it is an ideal
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opportunity
. This essay
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that
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countries
who are capable
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must
host these
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events
.

Firstly
, these
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events
can be
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organised
by the
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countries
which
are developed
.
In other words
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countries
that are capable and have
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enough
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resourto
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organise
such
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events
on a large scale. Whereas
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countries
which
are underdeveloped
shouldn't be taking such
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risks
, it would be worthwhile for
financially
secured
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countries
. Such
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events
give the hosting
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events
an
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opportunity
to showcase their hospitality and a
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chwnce
to gain respect.

Secondly
,
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countries
who lack or want to increase tourism can
also
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make
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of this
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opportunity
. Along with the participating athletes
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many
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people
from various nations visit the
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country
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to checkout
these
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events
. This works as an ideal
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opportunity
to promote the tourist attractions and local cuisines, arts and crafts, anything
that is
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uinque
to them. This is
also
a golden
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opportunity
to attain foreign direct investments by showing what they can
be offered
and their gains.

To conclude
, such
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events
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must
be
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organised
by nations having the capacity and wanting to promote tourism.

IELTS essay hosting International sporting events justified or not. agree disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
198 words
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