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hosting International sporting events justified or not.agree disagree?

hosting International sporting events justified or not. agree disagree? y7yeV

It is often argued that hosting sporting events on an international scale is not justifiable to some countries while for others it is an ideal opportunity. This essay agrees that countries who are capable must host these events. Firstly, these events can be organised by the countries which are developed. In other words countries that are capable and have enough resourto organise such events on a large scale. Whereas countries which are underdeveloped shouldn't be taking such risks, it would be worthwhile for financially secured countries. Such events give the hosting events an opportunity to showcase their hospitality and a chwnce to gain respect. Secondly, countries who lack or want to increase tourism can also make use of this opportunity. Along with the participating athletes many people from various nations visit the country to checkout these events. This works as an ideal opportunity to promote the tourist attractions and local cuisines, arts and crafts, anything that is uinque to them. This is also a golden opportunity to attain foreign direct investments by showing what they can be offered and their gains. To conclude, such events must be organised by nations having the capacity and wanting to promote tourism.

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often
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events
 on an international scale is not justifiable to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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countries
 while for others it is an ideal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfreedommomenttimeeventspaceconvenience
opportunity
. This essay This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesces
agrees
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countries
 who are capable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 host these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
.

Firstly
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events
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organised
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countries
 which are developed
. In other words
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countries
 that are capable and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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organise
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events
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countries
 which are underdeveloped
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risks
, it would be worthwhile for financially
 secured You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. Such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 give the hosting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfreedommomenttimeeventspaceconvenience
opportunity
 to showcase their hospitality and a Possible spelling mistake found.chanceChance
chwnce
 to gain respect.

Secondly
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countries
 who lack or want to increase tourism can also
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make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfreedommomenttimeeventspaceconvenience
opportunity
. Along with the participating athletes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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people
 from various nations visit the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
The verb 'check out' is spelled as two words. The noun 'checkout' is spelled as one.to check out
to checkout
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
. This works as an ideal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfreedommomenttimeeventspaceconvenience
opportunity
 to promote the tourist attractions and local cuisines, arts and crafts, anything that is
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uinque
 to them. This is also
 a golden You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfreedommomenttimeeventspaceconvenience
opportunity
 to attain foreign direct investments by showing what they can be offered
 and their gains.

To conclude
, such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 by nations having the capacity and wanting to promote tourism. 