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hosting an international sports event

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Hosting an international sports event in a country has been an age old tradition to interact and socialize with people from a faraway land. This not only increases the market value of a country and open doors for trade and tourism but is also beneficial from a political standpoint. People living overseas come to visit the host country to participate and attend sports events. There are a lot of sports events that are conducted on an International venue which people travel to watch. Some of the popular ones are The Olympic Games, The Grand Prix and Indian Premier League. Hoards of people from all over the were going to travel to Italy in the year 2020 to watch the Grand Prix but because of the pandemic it had to be cancelled. Countries invite foreign nationals to events and this helps improve inter-country relationships between nations. To attract foreign travel the host countries also put in a lot of work in developing real estate infrastructure. This leads to development and employment generation for the host country. Aside from attending the event, people love to vist local destinations and this creates a lot of income for the host countries. However, everything comes at a price. Countries deploy a lot of resources preparing for events thus sometimes resulting in wastage and depletion of treasuries. Countries incur a lot of debt thus creating unnecessary pressure on the economy and its people. Hosting such an event is a costly affair and might not be totally suitable for countries with low economic reserves. There is also increase in financial crimes such as frauds during events and increase in corruption is also a problem that becomes difficult to deal with.
Hosting an international sports
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tradition to interact and socialize with
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to participate and attend sports
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of sports
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travel to
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people
from all over the were going to travel to Italy in the year 2020 to
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watch
the Grand Prix
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of the pandemic it had to
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invite foreign nationals to
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events
and this
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helps
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inter-country relationships between nations.

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countries
also
put in a
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of work in developing real estate infrastructure. This leads to development and employment generation for the
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country
. Aside from attending the
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people
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local destinations and this creates a
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of income for the
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countries.

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, everything
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deploy a
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lot
of resources preparing for
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events
thus
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resulting in wastage and depletion of treasuries.
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incur a
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lot
of debt
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creating unnecessary pressure on the economy and its
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people
. Hosting such an
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event
is a costly affair and might not be
totally
suitable for
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countries
with low economic reserves. There is
also
increase in financial crimes such as frauds during
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events
and increase in corruption is
also
a problem that becomes difficult to deal with.
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IELTS essay hosting an international sports event

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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