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homework for schools' students

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While some people think that schools' students should not be given homework, many think that it's better if their teacher recommended bearable tasks to do at home. Personally, I believe that if pupils took some work to their homes, this would fill their free time and improve their understanding to the classes; however, this load hasn't to be extensive as they will have adverse results, and prevent them from perfecting any additional skills. From the one hand, in spite of the fact that students has to be relaxed when they return back to their homes, many argue that if they took some homework, this will not spoil their serenity. Once the kid exploited his free time with something beneficial, this improves their mentality and behavior alike. Furthermore, this category of people is proponent for homework because they consider that the more students study the better understanding they will have. In light of this dogma, students have to try to solve some exercises alone because it not only enhance their comprehension, but also improve their ability to depend on themselves. On the other hand, due to the fact that many students aren’t mature enough to control their feelings, they would be bored and lose study lust in case they were required to make every day home works. In light of this statement, some people think that their kids have to be free after school time because they don't want adverse results. Nonetheless, this seems to be correct if they took a heavy work load, but I bet that many teachers are aware of this point and try to give their students a little task. Moreover, this denomination of people stills against homework due to the fact that they want their kids to learn something rather than theoretical science. For example, many people consider dealing with people, or respecting old people aren't less important than homework; therefore, they request from teacher to leave pupils free after school time. I reckon that this won't be the case because when students have a well-developed mentality, they would be able to behave politely, respectfully, and cleverly. In conclusion, although some people still reluctant to homework, many agree with it. Personally, I think balanced homework would enhance the personality of the students, and fill their killing free time.
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that schools'
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should not be
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,
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think
that it's better if their teacher recommended bearable tasks to do at home.
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, I believe that if pupils took
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work to their
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, this would fill their
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and
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improve
their understanding to the classes;
however
, this load hasn't to be extensive as they will have adverse results, and
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prevent
them from perfecting any additional
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skills
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students
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be relaxed
when they
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,
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argue that if they took
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some
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homework
, this will not spoil their serenity. Once the kid exploited his
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free
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with something beneficial, this
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improves
their mentality and behavior alike.
Furthermore
, this category of
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people
is proponent for
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homework
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because
they consider that the more
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students
study the better understanding they will have. In light of this dogma,
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students
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have to
try to solve
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some
exercises alone
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enhance their comprehension,
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improve
their ability to depend on themselves.

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, due to the fact that
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aren’t mature
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enough
to control their feelings, they would
be bored
and lose study lust in case they
were required
to
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make
every day home works. In light of this statement,
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that their kids
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be
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after school
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they don't want adverse results. Nonetheless, this seems to be correct if they took a heavy work load,
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but
I bet that
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many
teachers are aware of this point and try to give their
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students
a
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little
task.
Moreover
, this denomination of
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people
stills against
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homework
due to the fact that they want their kids to learn something
rather
than theoretical science.
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,
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consider dealing with
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, or respecting
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aren't less
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than
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;
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, they request from teacher to
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pupils
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after school
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. I reckon that this won't be the case
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because
when
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students
have a well-developed mentality, they would be able to behave
politely
,
respectfully
, and
cleverly
.

In conclusion
, although
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still
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agree
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balanced
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would enhance the personality of the
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, and fill their killing
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time
.
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IELTS essay homework for schools' students

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
382 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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