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HometownWhere do you come from? - Do you like living in... (candidate’s hometown)? - What is it famous for?

HometownWhere do you come from? - Do you like living in. . . (candidate’s hometown)? - What is it famous for? PLD62
I come from Ho Chi Minh city. I have lived here since I was born until now. Through a process of urbanization, my hometown gradually becomes more beautiful and more modern. Ho Chi Minh City is famous for its modern skyscrapers such as lanmark or bitexco but also very classic with Notre Dame Cathedral. There are many unique and delicious dishes here with extremely cheap prices. Like bunbo, pho, banhtrangtron and many more delicious dishes. That's why I love this city, it's so bustling
I
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Ho Chi Minh city
. I have
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lived
here since I
was born
until
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now
. Through a process of urbanization, my hometown
gradually
becomes more
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beautiful
and more modern. Ho Chi Minh City is
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famous
for its modern skyscrapers such as
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lanmark
or
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bitexco
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but
also
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very
classic with Notre Dame Cathedral. There are
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many
unique and delicious dishes here with
extremely
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cheap
prices. Like
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bunbo
,
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pho
,
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banhtrangtron
and
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many
more delicious dishes. That's why I
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love
this city, it's
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so
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bustling
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IELTS essay HometownWhere do you come from? - Do you like living in. . . (candidate’s hometown)? - What is it famous for?

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  American English
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83 words
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