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Holidays in different way

Holidays in different way 2x2oJ

Everyone of us need to take rest from our work and stress of life between every period have to take 5 to 7 days can take break. The holiday for students that have at the end of every year help the family to have good vibes to travel and enjoy the time such as watching good movie, travel to somewhere, take a picnic with friends and barbecue. Specially the travel can change a lot and see how we have different area can enjoy it with different way, meet different people and seeing their traditional and culture, Also we can try many types of food in that city Moreover the holiday help to back with enough energy to complete the work and the stress of life

Did you mean "every one"?Every one
Everyone
 of us need to take rest from our work and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 of life between every period This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take 5 to 7 days can take break.

The holiday for students that have at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of every year This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the family to have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 vibes to travel and enjoy the time such as watching This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 movie, travel to somewhere, take a picnic with friends and barbecue.

Specially
 the travel can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 a lot and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 how we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 area can enjoy it with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 way, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and seeing their traditional and culture, Also
 we can try This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 types of food in that city

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 the holiday This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to back with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 energy to complete the work and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 of life