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In many countries schools have severe problem with student behavior. Write causes and give solution

In many countries schools have severe problem with student behavior. Write causes and give solution 2x2k6
Schools nowadays are becoming liberal in order to impart knowledge in an easy way whereas the students attitude is changing towards aggression. These pupils are making fun of a teacher and in some schools there have been some argument within the faculty and the student which resulted in a fight and the teacher was injured. The aggression against the teacher is seen in behavior of the students, attitude is on an elevator of angerness which can be lethal to student and schools as well. The biggest cause of their angerness is action movies, every kid dreams to act or live like a hero of a movie. One tries to adapt all the qualities of the actor of a movie hoping that he will become the same person in real life without understanding the fictional world of film industry. Along with this on internet some of the people uses inappropriate language which these kids learn and use them to curse someone. In order to prevent this, strictness os the teachers should be at its pinnacle not during teaching but any mischief or foul language of students must not be accepted, strict actions should be imposed to stop repetition of the same. This is what schools can do against the misbehave of students but parents also need to pay attention to this and keep an eye on their kid that no misuse of technology takes place and try to keep their child away from the dark side of internet. In conclusion, to keep a disciplined environment of school, actions must be taken when needed. Teachers being liberal for education is completely fine but when it comes to anything other than education strictness must be at its pinnacle
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Schools
nowadays are becoming liberal in order to impart knowledge
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in an easy way
whereas the
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students
attitude is changing towards aggression. These pupils are making fun of a
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teacher
and in
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some
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schools
there have been
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some
argument within the faculty and the
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student
which resulted in a fight and the
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teacher
was injured
. The aggression against the
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teacher
is
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seen
in behavior of the
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students
, attitude is on an elevator of
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angerness
which can be lethal to
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student
and
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schools
as well
. The biggest cause of their
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angerness
is action movies, every kid dreams to act or
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live
like a hero of a movie. One tries to adapt all the qualities of the actor of a movie hoping that he will become the same person in real life without understanding the fictional world of film industry. Along with this on internet
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some of the
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people
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uses
inappropriate language which these kids learn and
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use
them to curse someone. In order to
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prevent
this, strictness
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os
the
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teachers
should be at its pinnacle not during teaching
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but
any mischief or foul language of
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students
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must
not be
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accepted
, strict actions should
be imposed
to
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stop
repetition of the same. This is what
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schools
can do against
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'misbehave' is correct. If 'misbehave' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the misbehave
of
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students
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but
parents
also
need to pay attention to this and
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keep
an eye on their kid that no misuse of technology takes place and try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
their child away from the dark side of internet.
In conclusion
, to
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keep
a disciplined environment of
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school
, actions
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must
be taken
when needed.
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Teachers
being liberal for education is completely fine
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but
when it
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comes
to anything other than education strictness
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must
be at its
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pinnacle
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IELTS essay In many countries schools have severe problem with student behavior. Write causes and give solution

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