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How did you arrive at your post-MBA career interests? How have you or how will you position yourself to pursue them?

How did you arrive at your post-MBA career interests? How have you or how will you position yourself to pursue them? 3WNon
My post-MBA goals stem from my continued commitment to support the environment around me and limit emissions. Long-term, I hope to lead a company that provides solutions to facilitate net-zero carbon emissions for a wide array of companies. To reach this goal, I intend to attain a business education with a focus on the relationship between business and the environment before moving my career to ESG consulting to better understand the business case for achieving more sustainable operations. To date, I have learned various means of incremental emissions reductions at work both through my work as a natural gas pipeline engineer reducing fugitive emissions in a company set on achieving net-zero carbon emissions in the near future. While I know many tactics to reduce emissions, I need to learn the underlying costs, policies, and business relationships required to economically eliminate carbon emissions at scale. An MBA education would support this growth not only with a baseline of business and management education but also through student organizations such as Yale’s Business and the Environment and Social Impact Consulting clubs that would allow me to learn about integrating currently non-financial environmental impacts into business. After gaining the business education needed for the next step in my career, I intend to apply my past experiences and MBA education through ESG consulting. With the resources that Yale SOM provides and experience in connecting business and the environment, I can achieve my goal of leading companies to net-zero emissions to limit negative environmental impact.
My post-MBA goals stem from my continued commitment to support the
environment
around me and limit
emissions
. Long-term, I hope to lead a
company
that provides solutions to facilitate net-zero carbon
emissions
for a wide array of
companies
. To reach this goal, I intend to attain a
business
education
with a focus on the relationship between
business
and the
environment
before
moving my career to
ESG
consulting to better understand the
business
case for achieving more sustainable operations.

To date, I have learned various means of incremental
emissions
reductions at work both through my work as a natural gas pipeline engineer reducing fugitive
emissions
in a
company
set on achieving net-zero carbon
emissions
in the near future. While I know
many
tactics to
reduce
emissions
, I need to learn the underlying costs, policies, and
business
relationships required to
economically
eliminate carbon
emissions
at scale. An MBA
education
would support this growth not
only
with a baseline of
business
and management
education
but
also
through student organizations such as Yale’s
Business
and the
Environment
and Social Impact Consulting clubs that would
allow
me to learn about integrating
currently
non-financial environmental impacts into business.

After gaining the
business
education
needed for the
next
step in my career, I intend to apply my
past experiences
and MBA
education
through
ESG
consulting. With the resources that Yale
SOM
provides and experience in connecting
business
and the
environment
, I can achieve my goal of leading
companies
to net-zero
emissions
to limit
negative
environmental impact.
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IELTS essay How did you arrive at your post-MBA career interests? How have you or how will you position yourself to pursue them?

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