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Historical place should be modified or not

Historical place should be modified or not 8x1Bw

In India, all over the nation know about the sacrifice of worries. Historical place should be modified in modern era. Because new generation never know about history. Place and building should be easily to learn about history. Our nation renovate those thing which money can waste for example malls, cenimas etc. But they never spend single amount of money to historical places. This is shameful thing. Parents should be first job to tell about historical place. Sometimes individuals never go to their places because of dusk and bad environment. So i suggest to government should renovate this buildings as soon.

In India, all over the nation know about the sacrifice of worries. Historical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 should be modified
 in modern era. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 new generation never know about history. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
Place
 and building should be easily
 to learn about history. Our nation Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "renovates".renovates
renovate
Did you mean "this thing" or "those things"?this thingthose things
those thing
 which money can waste for example
 malls, Possible spelling mistake found.cinemascentimesenemasenigmasdenimsanimas
cenimas
 etc. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 they never spend single amount of money to historical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
. This is shameful thing. Parents should be first
Consider using a past participle here: "jobbed".jobbed
job
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 about historical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 individuals never go to their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of dusk and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 environment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 suggest to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should renovate Did you mean "these"?these
this
 buildings as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. 