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Adults and children work from home thanks to the advances of technology. what do you think about this statement ?

Adults and children work from home thanks to the advances of technology. what do you think about this statement? o8WBg

Nowadays, technology played a vital role in humans' lives with useful and eco-friendly functions. Nevertheless, adults regarless of children are accustomed to apply it for work as well as everything. There has been a trend that people work and study at home online without going outside. Actually, I think this is a negative development with three main reasons. First of all, human beings want to apply technology advances into a variety of industry to produce high-quality and time-saving products without workers. This is useful to the economy of nations. But adults began working from home without face-to-face meeting. Like the interaction of humans goes down, they don't have time to have a meeting outside to strike up a conversation or

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 development with three main reasons.

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