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Historical buildings should be preserved

Historical buildings should be preserved OMD53

In my opinion buildings which were built centuries ago should be protected. Because, they are our country's heritage and artistic works. Firstly, we cannot destroy art and should really protect it. For instance, Hindu temples are destroyed by Muslims in Ayodhya, which is a sacred place for Hindus. Temples are also historical buildings which we should preserve and protect from destruction. Secondly, we always find peace in arts, to see and understand the art on the walls is not an easy task. If we destroy it we cannot show our arts to our future generations and this architectures will be lost in history. Finally, if we are to protect this art, we should renovate them and savor the art for years and years. It would probably costs much but arts are invaluable, we should try to save them.

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