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wealthy countries should support poorer nation with humanitarian relief

wealthy countries should support poorer nation with humanitarian relief 252GX
While poor nations are trying to coexist with natural disasters, wealthy government shall support them with humanitarian relief. This essay agrees with this statement in light of the fact that everyone has the right to life in a safe environment and that will cause a huge impact in worldwide economy. Unfortunately nowadays a number of poor countries suffer from environmental problems. One of the most Recent technologys in rich nations provide alert system with smart sensors to declare a state of emergency prior to any harm happens, In order that poor countries can not afford the price of scientists and machines. Pauper government depends on natural resources to support their people to reduce poverty. The problem is government can not insurance natural resources areas, once that disaster came all these resources will be destroyed. Many families prefer to immigrate in another country to get better opportunity rather than lost their children in another catastrophe. Recent studies found that 20% of people in Europe came from poor nations. All nations in a way or another effect worldwide economy especially poor countries. 80% of natural resources came from poor lands In order that wealthy governments be going to protect these lands from any harm, even though that cost them lots money because when these lands were in danger that threatens all countries all around the world. Recent research concluded that the colossal difference between wealth countries and poorer countries may affect worldwide economy during the coming days. In conclusion, individuals who live in a safe lands can effect their ability to make more effort in country economy. In my opinion that is the most essential thing should rich nations take care about.
While
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poor
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nations
are trying to coexist with
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natural
disasters, wealthy
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government
shall support them with humanitarian relief. This essay
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agrees
with this statement in light of the fact that everyone has the right to life in a safe environment and that will cause a huge impact in worldwide economy.

Unfortunately nowadays a number of
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poor
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countries
suffer from environmental problems. One of the most Recent
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technologys
in rich
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nations
provide alert system with smart sensors to declare a state of emergency prior to any harm happens, In order that
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poor
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countries
can not afford the price of scientists and machines. Pauper
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government
depends on
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natural
resources to support their
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people
to
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reduce
poverty. The problem is
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government
can not insurance
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natural
resources areas, once that disaster came all these resources will be
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destroyed
.
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Many
families prefer to immigrate in another
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country
to
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get
better opportunity
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than lost their children in another catastrophe. Recent studies found that 20% of
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people
in Europe came from
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poor
nations.

All
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nations
in a way or another effect worldwide economy
especially
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poor
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countries
. 80% of
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natural
resources came from
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poor
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lands
In order that wealthy
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governments
be going to protect these
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lands
from any harm,
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that cost them lots money
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because
when these
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lands
were in
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danger
that threatens all
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countries
all around the world. Recent research concluded that the colossal difference between wealth
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countries
and poorer
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countries
may affect worldwide economy during the coming days.

In conclusion
, individuals who
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live
in a safe
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lands
can effect their ability to
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make
more effort in
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country
economy. In my opinion
that is
the most essential thing should rich
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nations
take care about.
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IELTS essay wealthy countries should support poorer nation with humanitarian relief

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
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