Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people think that without the Internet it is impossible to get a good education nowadays. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples.

Some people think that without the Internet it is impossible to get a good education nowadays. with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples. jo6n1
Nowadays, the internet is a vital thing for everyone. We all need access to the internet, especially during a covid pandemic. Also, it is more comfortable and flexible, due to the fact, that we do not need to go to the library or to school for education. From my point of view, we all can get an education without the internet but it will not be enough in this competitive world. Firstly, on the internet, there is more information than in the library. Because on the internet information is changing day by day and in books it is impossible. For instance, five days ago I wanted to get some more information about the population of Kenya, I went to the library, and in this book, there was incorrect information because it is changing quickly. Secondly, teaching without a screen is not suitable for today's technological revolution. For the new generation, internet sources are more easily perceptible than on paper. I want to analyze two sides of the coin, some people think that online sources are dangerous for our health and it will change mankind's dependent on relationships. To sum up, all that I discussed above, I strongly hold that, without the internet, we cannot get suitable and enough education. I believe that we all need more convenient applications for standing online. it will help us to avoid wasting time and energy.
Nowadays, the internet is a vital thing for everyone. We all need access to the internet,
especially
during a
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
pandemic.
Also
, it is more comfortable and flexible, due to the fact, that we do not need to go to the library or to school for education. From my point of view, we all can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an education without the internet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it will not be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
in this competitive world.
Firstly
, on the internet, there is more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
than in the library.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
on the internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
is changing day by day and in books it is impossible.
For instance
, five days ago I wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
about the population of Kenya, I went to the library, and in this book, there was incorrect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is changing
quickly
.
Secondly
, teaching without a screen is not suitable for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's technological revolution. For the new generation, internet sources are more
easily
perceptible than on paper. I want to analyze two sides of the coin,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that online sources are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
for our health and it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
mankind's dependent on relationships. To sum up, all that I discussed above, I
strongly
hold that, without the internet, we cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
suitable and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
education. I believe that we all need more convenient applications for standing online.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us to avoid wasting time and energy.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people think that without the Internet it is impossible to get a good education nowadays. with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
231 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    wealthy countries should support poorer nation with humanitarian relief
    While poor nations are trying to coexist with natural disasters, wealthy government shall support them with humanitarian relief. This essay agrees with this statement in light of the fact that everyone has the right to life in a safe environment and that will cause a huge impact in worldwide economy...
  • 5.5band
    advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion. impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.
    Whether or not tourist destinations benefit from international tourism is a debatable issue. To sonic governments, the local economic benefits are worth the overcrowding and hiked prices of the tourist season. However, there are environmental and social costs and other risks of relying on tourism as...
  • 6band
    Why fast-food is important or not to our health?
    In some states mostly people have difficulties in the health with eating fast food too much. Government need to rise a tax on this food. I strongly agree with it that the government need to rise a tax. In the following paradraphs i am going to show the reasons of my agreements with examples and some...
  • 6band
    how far do you believe in anthropocentric technology?
    The emergence of man centered technology is associated with modernism and consumerism therefore the modern society has used technology to fulfil the unlimited desire ignoring the nature and ecology. Such perspective of humans imbalances the ecology which causes natural disaster and disrupts the ecol...
  • 6band
    problems of speaking another language
    Latterly, learning foreign language plays an essential role in communication system; also, many people are suggesting to immigrate to others country for a million reasons that can cause connection problem because they can not speak as a native speaker similarly, to me it seems weakness in speaking f...
  • 6band
    learning another language
    Latterly, learning foreign language plays an essential role in communication system; also, many people are suggesting to immigrate to others country for a million reasons that can cause connection problem because they can not speak as a native speaker similarly, to me it seems weakness in speaking f...