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his is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of the process of how pineapples are produced.

his is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of the process of how pineapples are produced. 0EWBQ

The illustration reveals the way in which pineapples are manufactured for sale. Overall, After being collected and experiencing ripening time, pineapples are sorted out into various sizes before final processing for different purposes. Specifically, the smallest will be used for juice extracting while the largest ones are exported. Collected pineapples will ripen under temperature from 28 to 30 degrees Celcius, then people begin to divide them into 3 standard sizes, specifically 26cm, 28 cm, and 30cm ( total 2kg). Following that, collectors will wash them with fresh water preparing to process them. The 26cm-sized pineapples are used for rendering juice. Specifically, people will slice their tops off and peel rinds off, then put them into an extractor to get food drinking. The medium ones are also processed like the smaller ones but the peeled off are sliced and canned. The largest objects are selected to ship on freights overseas after being washed and packaged.

The illustration reveals the way in which pineapples are manufactured
 for sale.

Overall
, After being collected
 and experiencing ripening time, pineapples are sorted
 out into various sizes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 final processing for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 purposes. Specifically
, the smallest will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for juice extracting while the largest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
are exported
.

Collected pineapples will ripen under temperature from 28 to 30 degrees Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
Celcius
, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 to divide them into 3 standard sizes, specifically
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "26 cm"26 cm
26cm
, 28 cm, and Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "30 cm"30 cm
30cm
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
total Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "2 kg"2 kg
2kg
). Following that, collectors will wash them with fresh water preparing to process them. The Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "26 cm"26 cm
26cm
-sized pineapples are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for rendering juice. Specifically
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will slice their tops off and peel rinds off, then put them into an extractor to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 food drinking. The medium You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 are also
 processed like the smaller You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the peeled off are sliced
 and canned. The largest objects are selected
 to ship on freights overseas after being washed
 and packaged. 