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Describe a place you have visited where you can see interesting animals.

Describe a place you have visited where you can see interesting animals. do6Dr
Well, today I’m gonna talk about one of my most memorable trips which an occasion for me can see a group of 'real' panda. They are also endangered animals, so they live in nature reserves. I remember vividly that it was 3 years ago, before the appearance of covid 19. At that time, I was a student in high school. On summer vacation, after wondering where to travel, I finally choose China as my destination. As we all know panda's homeland is China and this is also the only place where they live. During that trip, I visited a friend in Sichuan, and on that occasion, we also went to the largest panda reserve in the world. This place is near the heart of the city, It took me just 20 mins to get there by car. I was really surprised by the vastness as well as the diversity and abundance of flora and fauna here. Pandas attracted me with their cuteness and mischief. They have thick white and black fur, especially their black eyes which look very funny. Their diet only includes bamboo and a few insects. Panda is a gentle, affectionate but also very naughty animal. They always like to climb the treetops. I spend most of my time playing and taking pictures with them. Then I also visited some other wild animals like the red panda and the snow leopard the trip was truly a once-in-a-lifetime experience for me as I got to play with the panda. In the future, I plan to return to this beautiful country
Well,
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today
I’m gonna talk about one of my most memorable trips which an occasion for me can
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see
a group of 'real' panda. They are
also
endangered animals,
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so
they
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live
in nature reserves.

I remember
vividly
that it was 3 years ago,
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before
the appearance of
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covid 19
. At that time, I was a student in high school. On summer vacation, after wondering where to travel, I
finally
choose China as my destination. As we all know panda's homeland is China and this is
also
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
place where they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
. During that trip, I visited a friend in Sichuan, and on that occasion, we
also
went to the largest panda reserve in the world. This place is near the heart of the city, It took me
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just
20
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mins
to
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get
there by car. I was
really
surprised by the vastness
as well
as the diversity and abundance of flora and fauna here. Pandas attracted me with their cuteness and mischief. They have thick white and black fur,
especially
their black eyes which look
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very
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funny
. Their diet
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only
includes bamboo and a few insects. Panda is a gentle, affectionate
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but
also
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very
naughty animal. They always like to climb the treetops. I spend most of my time playing and taking pictures with them. Then I
also
visited
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some
other wild animals like the red panda and the snow leopard the trip was
truly
a once-in-a-lifetime experience for me as I
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got
to play with the panda. In the future, I plan to return to this
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beautiful
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country

IELTS essay Describe a place you have visited where you can see interesting animals.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
260 words
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