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A HEALTHIER LIFESTYLE COMES TO THOSE WHO BELIEVES IN DOING MORE THAN JUST SAYING. PEOPLE LIVING IN URBAN AREAS ARE ALSO HEALTHY AND HAPPY. IN RURAL AREAS PEOPLE ARE MORE ACTIVE BECAUSE THEY HAVE TO DO A LOT OF HARD WORK AND ACCORDING TO THEIR WORK THEY EAT A HEALTHY DIET. MANY BELIEVE THAT LIVING IN COUNTRYSIDE LEADS TO MORE HEALTH THAN IN CITIES. LET’S HAVE A CLOSER LOOK ON THIS BY ASSESSING MORE. CITY LIFE IS FULL OF TENSIONS, STRESS, TASKS BUT IT ALSO OFFERS BETTER LIVING OPTIONS, MEDICAL FACILITIES, HEALTH BENEFITS. URBANIZATION HAS IMPROVED EVERYTHING EITHER IT IS STANDARD OF LIVING OR LIFESTYLWE OF PEOPLE. PEOPLE IN URBAN AREAS FOCUS ON THEIR HEALTH BY DOING YOGA, EXERCISE OR WORKING OUT IN GYMS. THEY BELIEVE IN EATING ORGANIC FOODS RATHER THAN JUNK. WITH GROWING TIME PEOPLE ARE LEADING TOWARDS A HEALTHY LIFESTYLE BECAUSE THEY KNOW THAT TO COPE UP WITH DAILY TASKS, FATIGUE, AND ILLNESS THEY NEED TO BE ACTIVE. ALTHOUGH THERE ARE MANY PROBLEMS IN URBAN LIFE LIKE POLLUTION, VIRUSES, LACK OF SPACE, HAZARDOUS GASES, ADULTERATED FOOD ITEMS BUT HEALTH FACILITIES AND EASY ACCESS TO INTERNET AND JOBS CAN’T BE IGNORED. MEANWHILE IN COUNTRYSIDE PEOPLE TEND TO WORK ON THEIR FARMS, THEY BELIVE IN DOING HARDWORK AND KEEP THEMSELVES HEALTHY NATURALLY. IN VILLAGES ACCESS TO JUNK FOOD IS LESS AND PEOPLE DEPENDS ON HOME MADE FOOD ONLY WITH THIS THE RISK OF INFECTION ALSO BECOMES LESS. THEY CAN BREATHE IN FRESH AIR AND CAN AVOID CONTAMINATED LIFE EASILY. AS THEY HAVE ALL THE NATURAL RESOURCES, THEY ENJOY A HELTHY LIFESTYLE BY KEEPING THEMSELVES CLOSE TO NATURE. THEIR LIFESTYLES ARE PLANNED IN SUCH A WAY, THAT WITHOUT DOING MUCH THEY MANAGE TO KEEP THEM FIT. BUT AS COMPARED TO CITIES THEY ARE NOT FULLY EQUIPPED WITH ALL THE LEISURES, HEALTH FACILITIES OR EDUCATION. FOR GETTING MODULAR THINGS THEY NEED TO COME TO CITIES ONLY. IN MY CHOICE, CITIES ARE BEST PLACE TO LIVE AS THEY HAVE ALL THE AMENITIES ONE NEED TO HAVE FOR A BETTER LIFESTYLE. LIVING COUNTRYSIDE IS GOOD BUT LACK OF AMENITIES CAUSE PEOPLE MIGRATE TO CITIES. ONE CAN HAVE A HELTHY LIFESTYLE ANYWHERE IF HE HAS A STRONG WILL TO MAINTAIN IT.
A HEALTHIER
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LIFESTYLE
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COMES
TO THOSE WHO BELIEVES IN
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DOING
MORE THAN
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JUST
SAYING.
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PEOPLE
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LIVING
IN URBAN AREAS ARE
ALSO
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HEALTHY
AND HAPPY. IN RURAL AREAS
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PEOPLE
ARE MORE ACTIVE
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BECAUSE
THEY
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HAVE TO
DO
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A LOT OF
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HARD
WORK AND ACCORDING TO THEIR WORK THEY EAT A
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HEALTHY
DIET.
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MANY
BELIEVE THAT
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LIVING
IN COUNTRYSIDE LEADS TO MORE
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HEALTH
THAN IN
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CITIES
.
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LET
’S HAVE A CLOSER LOOK ON THIS BY ASSESSING MORE.

CITY LIFE IS FULL OF TENSIONS,
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STRESS
, TASKS
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BUT
IT
ALSO
OFFERS BETTER
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LIVING
OPTIONS, MEDICAL FACILITIES,
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HEALTH
BENEFITS. URBANIZATION HAS
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IMPROVED
EVERYTHING EITHER IT IS STANDARD OF
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LIVING
OR
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LIFESTYLWE
OF
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PEOPLE
.
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PEOPLE
IN URBAN AREAS FOCUS ON THEIR
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HEALTH
BY
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DOING
YOGA, EXERCISE OR WORKING OUT IN GYMS. THEY BELIEVE IN EATING ORGANIC
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FOODS
RATHER
THAN JUNK. WITH GROWING TIME
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PEOPLE
ARE LEADING TOWARDS A
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HEALTHY
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LIFESTYLE
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BECAUSE
THEY KNOW THAT TO COPE UP WITH DAILY TASKS, FATIGUE, AND ILLNESS THEY NEED TO BE ACTIVE. ALTHOUGH THERE ARE
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MANY
PROBLEMS IN URBAN LIFE LIKE POLLUTION, VIRUSES, LACK OF SPACE, HAZARDOUS GASES, ADULTERATED
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FOOD
ITEMS
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BUT
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HEALTH
FACILITIES AND EASY ACCESS TO INTERNET AND JOBS CAN’T BE
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IGNORED
.

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MEANWHILE
IN COUNTRYSIDE
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PEOPLE
TEND TO WORK ON THEIR FARMS,
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THEY BELIVE
IN
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DOING
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HARDWORK
AND
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KEEP
THEMSELVES
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HEALTHY
NATURALLY
. IN VILLAGES ACCESS TO JUNK
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FOOD
IS LESS AND
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PEOPLE
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DEPENDS
ON HOME MADE
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FOOD
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ONLY
WITH THIS THE
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RISK
OF INFECTION
ALSO
BECOMES LESS. THEY CAN BREATHE IN FRESH AIR AND CAN AVOID CONTAMINATED LIFE
EASILY
. AS THEY HAVE ALL THE NATURAL RESOURCES, THEY ENJOY A
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HELTHY
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LIFESTYLE
BY KEEPING THEMSELVES CLOSE TO NATURE. THEIR
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LIFESTYLES
ARE PLANNED
IN SUCH A WAY, THAT WITHOUT
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DOING
MUCH THEY MANAGE TO
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KEEP
THEM FIT.
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BUT
AS COMPARED TO
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CITIES
THEY ARE NOT
FULLY
EQUIPPED WITH ALL THE
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LEISURES
,
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HEALTH
FACILITIES OR EDUCATION. FOR GETTING MODULAR THINGS THEY NEED TO
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COME
TO
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CITIES
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ONLY
.

IN MY CHOICE,
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CITIES
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ARE BEST
PLACE TO
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LIVE
AS THEY HAVE ALL THE AMENITIES ONE NEED TO HAVE FOR A BETTER
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LIFESTYLE
.
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LIVING
COUNTRYSIDE IS
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GOOD
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BUT
LACK OF AMENITIES CAUSE
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PEOPLE
MIGRATE TO
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CITIES
. ONE CAN HAVE A
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HELTHY
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LIFESTYLE
ANYWHERE IF HE HAS A STRONG WILL TO MAINTAIN IT.
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IELTS essay healthy lifestyle in urban or countyside

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
367 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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