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Healthcare management in Nigeria

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My desire to pursue a Master's program in the Department of Healthcare Administration at the University of Iowa is born out of a burning desire to garner requisite knowledge needed in effecting the needed changes I crave to see in the Nigerian healthcare sector with a special focus on rural healthcare development and healthcare value. The poor management of human resources is a major challenge in my country. Every health organization needs people that are adequately skilled, enthused, and productive. These important qualities would be absent if the health workers are not well paid or are understaffed and overworked; which is widely seen in the healthcare system in Nigeria. The concept of human resource management cuts across recruitment, evaluation, promotion, retirement and dismissal of personnel, if these are done adequately, it creates an environment for patients to receive the best healthcare. It is a popular saying that "money is power". Just as fuel powers an automobile engine, so also financial resources empower the healthcare organization. The health sector is one of, if not the most, crucial sectors of a nation. As a result, a lot of financial resources are budgeted for the smooth running of this sector. To achieve the set goal, the financial spending must be prudent. HealthCare facilities are grossly unequipped, especially in the rural areas and some of the facilities available are only accessible to the rich due to how expensive the services are which is further buttressed by the absence of an appropriately managed healthcare insurance.
My desire to pursue a Master's program in the Department of Healthcare Administration at the University of Iowa
is born
out of a burning desire to garner requisite knowledge needed in effecting the needed
changes
I crave to
see
in the Nigerian healthcare
sector
with a special focus on rural healthcare development and healthcare value.

The poor management of human resources is a major challenge in my country. Every health organization needs
people
that are
adequately
skilled, enthused, and productive. These
important
qualities would be absent if the health workers are not well paid or
are understaffed
and overworked; which is
widely
seen
in the healthcare system in Nigeria. The concept of human
resource
management
cuts
across recruitment, evaluation, promotion, retirement and dismissal of personnel, if these
are done
adequately
, it creates an environment for patients to receive the best healthcare.

It is a popular saying that
"
money is power
"
.
Just
as fuel powers an automobile engine,
so
also
financial resources empower the healthcare organization. The health
sector
is one of, if not the most, crucial
sectors
of a nation.
As a result
,
a lot of
financial resources
are budgeted
for the smooth running of this
sector
. To achieve the set goal, the financial spending
must
be prudent.
HealthCare
facilities are
grossly
unequipped,
especially
in the rural areas and
some of the
facilities available are
only
accessible to the rich due to how expensive the services are which is
further
buttressed by the absence of an
appropriately
managed healthcare insurance.
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IELTS essay Healthcare management in Nigeria

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
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