Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Healthcare and education are essential aspects of our live.

Healthcare and education are essential aspects of our live. OVWLy
Healthcare and education are essential aspects of our live. They change and develop every year. Without hesitation, both of systems part of human being. It is the responsibility of the government ensure quality education and healthcare to its citizens and I strongly agree with this view. To begin with all people are working for the government and our knowledge, also health have to be study. Absolutely any country has low-income residents and poor people, they can not afford the higher education and good healthcare systems. Moreover, if the government provides free system, the rate of literacy will increase year by year and without any doubt make greater efforts in development of the country. The state have to upsurge the number of inhabitant, but not to decline them. Furthemore, healthy nation is the base of an industrial nation and it is a government’s responsibility to make the proper medical treatment. One of the reason to oppose the idea is that free medical service makes people irresponsible. Many of them believe that free medicine is not correct as paid medicine. Also, free institution will not give much information and it will seem to peoples learning. For instance, many private schools are working better than state schools, because parents and their kids more active in life. In conclusion, if education and medical facility are provided by the state to its citizens, then a country will get more benefits from it. It’s two main needs for human.
Healthcare and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
are essential aspects of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
and develop every year. Without hesitation, both of systems part of human being. It is the responsibility of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
ensure quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
and healthcare to its citizens and I
strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this view.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are working for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
and our knowledge,
also
health
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be study.
Absolutely
any country has low-income residents and poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, they can not afford the higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
healthcare systems.
Moreover
, if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
provides
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
system, the rate of literacy will increase year by year and without any doubt
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
greater efforts in development of the country. The state
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
upsurge the number of inhabitant,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not to decline them.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Furthemore
, healthy nation is the base of an industrial nation and it is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government’s
responsibility to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the proper medical treatment.

One of the reason to oppose the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
medical service
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
irresponsible.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
of them believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
medicine is not correct as paid medicine.
Also
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
institution will not give much information and it will seem to
The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "people".
peoples
learning.
For instance
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
private schools are working better than state schools,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
parents and their kids more active in life.

In conclusion
, if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
and medical facility
are provided
by the state to its citizens, then a country will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more benefits from it. It’s two main needs for human.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Healthcare and education are essential aspects of our live.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts