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Health problems and couse

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These day the heathy of body consider as one of the most important in the would. There is a lot of advantages and some of disadvantages. Firstly, the main benefit of good healthy for the body should be eat less calories as much as possible. on other hand, one of most common drawback not do any excirese. Secondary, some of doctors think healthy of body depand on multiple aspects such as food, well sleep andGood break fast.

Did you mean "this day" or "These days"?This dayThese days
These day
The phrase 'the heathy of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the heathy of
 body consider as one of the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 in the would. There is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 advantages and After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the disadvantages") or simply say "some disadvantages".some of the disadvantagessome disadvantages
some of disadvantages
. Firstly
, the main benefit of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 healthy for the body should be Consider using the past participle "eaten"?eaten
eat
Did you mean "fewer calories"?fewer calories
less calories
 as much as possible. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 other hand, one of most common drawback not do any Possible spelling mistake found.exciseexpiresexcitesexcreteexcises
excirese
. Secondary, After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the doctors") or simply say "some doctors".some of the doctorssome doctors
some of doctors
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 healthy of body Possible spelling mistake found.demanddepend
depand
 on multiple aspects such as food, well sleep Possible spelling mistake found.and Good
andGood
 break This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
. 