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Essay on disadvantage of money and bussiness

Essay on disadvantage of money and bussiness 8gLKw

This is currently contentious argument over whether should be money is on a parameter to indicate business measure. In my opinion, if we have money than we are capable of carry out the business. Firstly. a numerous people have a confidence in huge amount require to run a business. For example, on condition that establishment of leather business needs investment for buying the material machinery and etc. Furthermore, in the absence of money contact with bank for the arrangement. We can manage a loan from bank and getting start our work. On the other hand, some people think that not only a money required for running a business. Consequently, employers play an important role for business. In other words, The destruction and success of business based on the loyalty of employees. In conclusion, It is not appropriate wrote a money is neccessary for starting a work. A number of different material also required.

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