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Having good economic progress is certainly one of the most important responsibilities of every government, however, there are some other key directions, where they should achieve equal success.

Having good economic progress is certainly one of the most important responsibilities of every government, however, there are some other key directions, where they should achieve equal success. Governments contain several ministries and each has its own function and liability to make progress. The economic development of the country is something that makes any other development possible. There is not any improvment without having a strong economy. Therefore, every government should work hardest to get economic stability. It enables them to collect funds for other areas like healthcare, education, infrastructure, etc. On the other hand, I think, that economic progress can not be achieved without a proper judical system. An impartial and independent court system is a primary need for creating a successful business sector. A trustworthy court system ensures a stable business environment. Furthermore, the foreign investors are interested in making investments only in case the security is guaranteed. Thus, establishing a reliable judical system should be another important goal for governments. International relationships is other major area, in which, governments should take a great effort. Nowadays, it is very difficult, if not impossible for the countries to develop independently. Every state has to establish partnership with other countries for economic and security purposes. In addition there are a lot of international organizations, which help the countries in different fields. Governments should work with the other countries and international organizations to get the necessary progress. To summerize, I think that an economic progress is vital for every government, but they should not be concentrated solely on the ecocomic development. Other important areas I think they should put a lot of work in are a judicat system and the interntional relationships.
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responsibilities of every
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key directions, where they should achieve equal success.
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Governments
contain several ministries and each has its
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own
function and liability to
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make
progress.

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development of the
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country
is something that
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makes
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other
development possible. There is not any
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improvment
without having a strong economy.
Therefore
, every
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government
should work hardest to
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get
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economic
stability. It enables them to collect funds for
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other
areas like healthcare, education, infrastructure, etc.

On the
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hand, I
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progress can not
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judical
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. An impartial and independent court
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is a primary need for creating a successful business sector. A trustworthy court
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system
ensures a stable business environment.
Furthermore
, the foreign investors
are interested
in making investments
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only
in case the security
is guaranteed
.
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system
should be another
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governments
.

International relationships
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major area, in which,
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should take a great effort. Nowadays, it is
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countries
to develop
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economic
and security purposes. In
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addition
there are
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a lot of
international organizations, which
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fields.
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should work with the
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countries
and international organizations to
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the necessary progress.

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progress is vital for every
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,
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they should not
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ecocomic
development.
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they should put
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judicat
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interntional
relationships.
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IELTS essay Having good economic progress is certainly one of the most important responsibilities of every government, however, there are some other key directions, where they should achieve equal success.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
281 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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