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happiness is hard to define.

happiness is hard to define. KnEM1
In my opinion, I totally argee that happiness is hard to define. First of all, happiness is an emotional state expressed by feelings of joy and satisfaction. Therefore, happiness means different things to each person because each person has different experience and definition of happiness depending on their age and life situation. No one can fully understand the feelings of others, so finding one universal definition of happiness is impossible. For example, one person may feel happy about having fun, but another person may feel satisfied when working. Moreover, the level of satisfaction and joy to achieve happiness of each person is also different, there are people who think that happiness is simply when they can eat a delicious food or have a house to live in. But there are also people who feel happy when they have great success or live in a luxurious villa.
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IELTS essay happiness is hard to define.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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