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In present scenario, the life age of people is increas as compared to past. A some section of society people claimed that the older people have to continue to join with work force I am totally disagree with this give notion along with I will discussed my point of views behind it in the forthcoming paragraphs. Commencing with, undoubtedly as well as the time period of old people become longer than before. To explain it, nowadays old people have to face health disease, because the lack of medicine and lacks of government system. More over, they have not as too much pwer to do work on any factory etcetra. Due to it older people not able to work over powered. For instance, in 2018, a law was passed by japan government for older people they do not need to do work the afer age 60. Thus, it will to necessity for people. to their future if they do not allow to do work. Furthermore, there are some more drawbacks of it. Gray haried people need to stay free at this age they and do more and more rest how much can do. it the obler people used to involved work places such as construction work, they connot haile the problems during that time this work require lot of physical strentah as well as more power. Hence, this will not be the exact way to increase the economic value of any country apart frome authorities mush give them to funds as penstion to old people and treate their problem without their salary. In conclusion, given aformentioned information is quite evident that older people have to enjoy lot of at the golden age which will be righ path for them. to happly passed their life before die from.
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increas
as compared to past. A
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some
section of society
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people
claimed that the
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older
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people
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have to
continue to
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join
with
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work
force I am
totally
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disagree
with this give notion along with I will
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discussed
my point of views behind it in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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undoubtedly
as well
as the time period of
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old
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people
become longer than
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before
. To
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explain
it, nowadays
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old
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people
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have to
face health disease,
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because
the lack of medicine and lacks of
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government
system. More over, they have not as too much
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pwer
to do
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work
on any factory
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etcetra
. Due to it
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older
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people
not able to
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work
over powered.
For instance
, in 2018, a law
was passed
by japan
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government
for
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older
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people
they do not need to do
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work
the
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afer
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age
60.
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, it will to necessity for
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people
.
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to
their future if they do not
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allow
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to do
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work
.
Furthermore
, there are
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some
more drawbacks of it. Gray
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haried
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need to stay free at this
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they and do more and more rest how much can do. it the
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obler
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people
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places such as construction
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, they
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connot
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haile
the problems during that time this
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work
require lot of physical
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strentah
as well
as more power.
Hence
, this will not be the exact way to increase the economic value of any country apart
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frome
authorities mush give them to funds as
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penstion
to
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old
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people
and
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treate
their problem without their salary.
In conclusion
,
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aformentioned
information is quite evident that
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older
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people
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have to
enjoy
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lot of
at the golden
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which will be
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righ
path for them.
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to
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happly
passed their life
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IELTS essay Hahaha bash hash sbsbss sh and she SBS hss sh ssh AHS and

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
296 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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