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Advantages and disadvantage of watching TV

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There is also a beneficial to watch TV. But there again a maliciaus side of this. We can a good time watching TV and have a well lough. However we can cry, we can be sad, we can be depressed. On Television 50 percent are often serials. 10 percent give cartoons for children. Another 10 percentage impart cantemparary music. 10 percent out on interesting shows from each other. 5 percent of interesting Uzbek movies are shown on TV, 5 percent of world movies are shown on TV. The remaining 10 percent are advertised. It doesn't even have to watch 50 percent of the series. The reason the serial with the day and that is Harm. 10 percent the sadness of music makes a person sad. Some of them, such as movies, shows cartoons, lower the mood. Conclusion. You should only use the TV to watch useful and necessory things. You only need to watch TV shows and movies that are funny and interesting. So see for yourself only the necessory and useful comedy shows.
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time watching TV and have a well lough.
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we can cry, we can be sad, we can
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On Television 50
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are
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serials. 10
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give cartoons for children. Another 10 percentage impart
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cantemparary
music. 10
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out on interesting
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shows
from each other. 5
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percent
of interesting Uzbek
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movies
are shown
on TV, 5
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of world
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movies
are shown
on TV. The remaining 10
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are advertised
. It doesn't even
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50
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of the series. The reason the serial with the day and
that is
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percent
the sadness of music
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makes
a person sad.
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Some
of them, such as
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movies
,
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cartoons, lower the mood.

Conclusion. You should
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the TV to
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useful and
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necessory
things. You
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need to
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and
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funny
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantage of watching TV

Essay
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3 paragraphs
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