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Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. JROD

A good healthcare system is vital for a nation’s success. Ministries of healthcare globally spend a great sum of the nation’s revenue on the treatment of diseases and illnesses, instead of focusing on disease prevention and education related to individual’s health. I strongly agree with the latter idea and this essay will argue as to why it is important for governments around the world to concentrate more on how to prevent diseases and educate communities about health. The influence of high-speed internet has impacted the traditional way people commute to work. The rapid development of technology in the past decade or so has enabled people to operate remotely. Most workers and employees are starting to prefer working from home instead of commuting daily to work. In this essay I intend to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of teleworking from home.

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 diseases and educate communities about health.

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 commute to work. The rapid development of technology in the past decade or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 has enabled This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to operate remotely
. Most workers and employees are starting to prefer working from home instead
 of commuting daily to work. In this essay I intend to discuss the benefits and drawbacks of teleworking from home. 