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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. LYK1
The role of government in the development of railways is widely debated with many people claiming that this can lead to a myriad of concerns. I strongly agree with this statement and viewpoints related to the same will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. There is no doubt that railway has wealth of benefits, less time consuming being the pivotal one. Railways not only contribute to the cost effectiveness and low expenditure on fuel but also lead to the numerous other benefits in various fields like defense, medical and goods transport. Furthermore, the railway tracks are customized for the railway only hence there is no reason for traffic which leads to require minimum time. Needless to say, all these benefits stand people in good stead as far as their augmenting prosperity and excellence is concerned. Probing further, railway has put a significant mark in the goods transport. To exemplify, fuels like petrol, diesel or gaseous fuels which are harmful for living being if transport by roads as the leakage of these fuels can be adequate reason for fire and blast of the vehicle. Besides, it is also true that water transport during the draught in a particular region takes place with the help of railways. Hence, it is apparent that why it should be taken in consideration by government for spending money. Nevertheless, despite the benefits of the railways, there are minor benefits to the road transport which are less capital outlay and feasible in rural areas. Moreover, in small towns road transport provides the door to door services where railway stations are not available. From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that modes of transport, railway and road are important and their advantages are indeed too great to ignore.
The role of
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government
in the development of
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railways
is
widely
debated with
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many
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people
claiming that this can lead to a myriad of concerns. I
strongly
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agree
with this statement and viewpoints related to the same will
be discussed
in the upcoming paragraphs.

There is no doubt that
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railway
has wealth of
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benefits
, less
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time consuming
being the pivotal one.
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Railways
not
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only
contribute to the
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cost effectiveness
and low expenditure on
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fuel
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but
also
lead to the numerous other
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benefits
in various fields like defense, medical and
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goods
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transport
.
Furthermore
, the
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railway
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tracks
are customized
for the
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railway
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only
hence
there is no reason for traffic which leads to require minimum time. Needless to say, all these
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benefits
stand
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people
in
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good
stead as far as their augmenting prosperity and excellence
is concerned
.

Probing
further
,
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railway
has put a significant mark in the
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goods
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transport
. To exemplify,
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fuels
like petrol, diesel or gaseous
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fuels
which are harmful for living being if
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transport
by
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roads
as the leakage of these
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fuels
can be adequate reason for fire and blast of the vehicle.
Besides
, it is
also
true that water
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transport
during the
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draught
in a particular region takes place with the
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help
of
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railways
.
Hence
, it is apparent that why it should
be taken
in consideration by
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government
for spending money.

Nevertheless
, despite the
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benefits
of the
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railways
, there are minor
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benefits
to the
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road
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transport
which are less capital outlay and feasible in rural areas.
Moreover
, in
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small
towns
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road
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transport
provides the
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door to door
services where
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railway
stations are not available.

From what has
been discussed
above, one can conclude that modes of
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transport
,
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railway
and
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road
are
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important
and their advantages are
indeed
too great to
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ignore
.
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IELTS essay Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
292 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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