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Write about the following topic: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. 77dY
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to studying with a group of students in classroom, even it doesn't help to get good marks for them. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that learning online at home is much more beneficial than in a classroom. First of all, I believe that studying online makes student more intelligent than combined studies. Students can learn themselves by watching online tutorials and do practical experiments by watching each step in detail. Whereas, you will not able to practice individually, if you opt for group studies at classroom. For example, A lot of students studied themselves by watching online tutorials and became great professionals. That's why it is more important to choose the online classes than classroom. Secondly, you can study according to your time and no need for rushing to classroom on time by running around the bus. In other words, you can utilize that travelling time for your own work. It saves the time and money as well. Online classes gives clear picture and detail information of every module in your subject. You can also spend time with your family while studying online classes. There are many advantages with learning online at home. It is also have various practical examples than classroom studies. You can also interact with various people online to clarify your questions while studying. To conclude, I strongly believe that online classes are more beneficial than studying with a group of students in classroom because it saves your time and money.
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studying
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help
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get
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good
marks for them.

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think
that learning
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online
at home is much more beneficial than in a classroom.

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First of all
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studying
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online
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makes
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student
more intelligent than combined
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studies
.
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Students
can learn themselves by watching
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online
tutorials and do practical experiments by watching each step in detail. Whereas, you will not able to practice
individually
, if you opt for group
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studies
at classroom.
For example
,
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A lot of
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students
studied themselves by watching
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online
tutorials and became great professionals. That's why it is more
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important
to choose the
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online
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classes
than classroom.

Secondly
, you can
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study
according to your
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time
and no need for rushing to classroom on
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time
by running around the bus.
In other words
, you can utilize that travelling
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time
for your
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own
work. It saves the
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time
and money
as well
.
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Online
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classes
gives
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clear
picture and detail information of every module in your subject. You can
also
spend
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time
with your family while
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studying
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online
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classes
. There are
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many
advantages with learning
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online
at home. It is
also
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have
various practical examples than classroom
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studies
. You can
also
interact with various
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people
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online
to clarify your questions while studying.

To conclude
, I
strongly
believe that
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online
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classes
are more beneficial than
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studying
with a group of
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students
in classroom
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because
it saves your
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time
and money.
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IELTS essay : Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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