It is argued that funds should be spent by the authority on rail track rather than on roads. In my own opinion, I totally agree to this point of view because of the present focus on rail transportation as well as the cost implication for the users.
First and foremost, recently, the most important reason why the rail track should be considered for more allocations by the government is that there has been a recent increase in the number of people who use the rail mode of passage. For instance, recently, most trains leaving the station now carry passengers to their fullest capacity, something which was not so in the past decades. Thus making rail way a present focus of travel for most citizens. Therefore, any amount spent on it would not be considered a waste.
Secondly, another reason why more funds should be budgeted for rail track construction other than roads is that it is cheaper to journey within and outside the metropolis with trains. To illustrate, in Nigeria, the cost of travelling from Lagos to Osogbo by road is almost thrice the price of conveyance to the same destination by train. This by implication makes people spend less to move from one place to the other everyday. Thus making train transportation the best choice for commuters. As a result, allocating more funds to building this means is very essential.
In conclusion, it is agreed that the budget made by the authority for building rail path should be more than the fund disbursed for road construction given the recent increase in the population that plies the rail as opposed to that of the road and the less expensive outlay of train transportation.
It
is argued
that funds should
be spent
by the authority on
rail
track
rather
than on
roads
. In my
own
opinion, I
totally
agree
to this point of view
because
of the present focus on
rail
transportation
as well
as the cost implication for the users.
First
and foremost, recently, the most
important
reason why the
rail
track
should
be considered
for more allocations by the
government
is that there has been a recent increase in the number of
people
who
use
the
rail
mode of passage.
For instance
, recently, most
trains
leaving the station
now
carry passengers to their fullest capacity, something which was not
so
in the past decades.
Thus
making
rail
way a present focus of travel for most citizens.
Therefore
, any amount spent on it would not
be considered
a waste.
Secondly
, another reason why more funds should
be budgeted
for
rail
track
construction other than
roads
is that it is cheaper to journey within and outside the metropolis with
trains
. To illustrate, in Nigeria, the cost of travelling from Lagos to
Osogbo
by
road
is almost thrice the price of conveyance to the same destination by
train
. This by implication
makes
people
spend less to
move
from one place to the other
everyday
.
Thus
making
train
transportation the best choice for commuters.
As a result
, allocating more funds to building this means is
very
essential.
In conclusion
, it is
agreed
that the budget made by the authority for building
rail
path should be more than the
fund
disbursed for
road
construction
given
the recent increase in the population that plies the
rail
as opposed to that of the
road
and the less expensive outlay of
train
transportation.
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19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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