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email to kookmin university about some thing

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To Kookmin university Hi: I am Iranian student of the first semester of the bachelor course of electrical engineering. I am much eager to continue my studies at your university, I have some question: Do your university have a full funded for some one like me who want to study at Kookmin university for spring semester for second term? Due to the fact that I got a full grade point average from the first semesterIf your answer is positive let me know in the details Thank you in advance for your attention
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Hi: I
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student of the
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semester of the bachelor course of electrical engineering. I am much eager to continue my studies at your
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university
, I have
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some
question: Do your
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university
have a full funded for
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some one
like me who want to study at
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Kookmin
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university
for spring semester for second term? Due to the fact that I
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got
a full grade point average from the
first
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semesterIf
your answer is
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me know in the
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details


Thank you in advance for your attention
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IELTS essay email to kookmin university about some thing

Essay
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2 paragraphs
91 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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