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government should improve railways rather than roads

government should improve railways rather than roads eANnO
It is considered that the government ought to improve railways rather than roads. I completely agree with this that spending money on developing railways is more beneficial. This essay will examine this with reasons and examples. First of all, it is clear that the number of roads is much more than railways around the world. Even though railways are less preferred than roads, using railways has less accident risk than roads. In addition, railways are more efficient for the logistic and transportation sectors. For instance, a logistic company may carry much more goods than a vehicle. (van, truck) On the other hand, compared to vehicles, transporting through railways is faster than roads. Because while driving a vehicle for transportation, the driver must give a break every 4 hours, according to transportation rules. And also traffic jams in some areas may affect the arriving time. Secondly, it is thought that railways are more environmental-friendly than roads. Especially for long distances, the impacts of motor vehicles will be a serious problem for air pollution. Building more railways also will reduce the number of vehicles for logistics and transportation. This may affect the traffic jam in a good way on roads. In other words, more railways might decrease traffic accidents. Big vehicles on the roads, might affect the other drivers and this cause serious and deathful traffic accidents. In conclusion, the importance of railways is should be considered by the government. Have a more budget for railways is more beneficial and eco-friendly. Also, effective for the transportation and logistics sectors.
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is considered
that the
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government
ought to
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improve
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railways
rather
than
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roads
. I completely
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agree
with this that spending money on developing
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railways
is more beneficial. This essay will examine this with reasons and examples.

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First of all
, it is
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clear
that the number of
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roads
is much more than
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railways
around the world.
Even though
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railways
are less preferred than
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roads
, using
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railways
has less accident
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risk
than
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roads
.
In addition
,
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railways
are more efficient for the logistic and
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transportation
sectors.
For instance
, a logistic
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company
may carry much more
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goods
than a
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vehicle
. (van, truck)

On the other hand
, compared to
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vehicles
, transporting through
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railways
is faster than
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roads
.
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Because
while driving a
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vehicle
for
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transportation
, the driver
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must
give a break every 4 hours, according to
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transportation
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rules
. And
also
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traffic
jams in
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some
areas may affect the arriving time.

Secondly
, it is
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thought
that
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railways
are more environmental-friendly than
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roads
.
Especially
for long distances, the impacts of motor
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vehicles
will be a serious problem for air pollution. Building more
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railways
also
will
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reduce
the number of
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vehicles
for
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logistics
and
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transportation
. This may affect the
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traffic
jam in a
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good
way on
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roads
.
In other words
, more
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railways
might decrease
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traffic
accidents.
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Big
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vehicles
on the
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roads
, might affect the other drivers and this cause serious and
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deathful
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traffic
accidents.

In conclusion
, the importance of
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railways
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is
should
be considered
by the
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government
. Have a more budget for
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railways
is more beneficial and eco-friendly.
Also
, effective for the
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transportation
and
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logistics
sectors.
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IELTS essay government should improve railways rather than roads

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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