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glonal warming effects entire world

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This 2021 is the crucial year for Global warming. Speaker is telling about the Global warming situation around the world, as per Paris agreement all countries need to have a decrease in temperature 2'C; however, the temperature decrease a 1. 5'C. It's a good news but still, some of the countries are releasing more and more carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. The European Union, The United States of America, South Africa, and China have achieved this target. All of this data has been collected on 1st June 2021 from Climate Action trackers.

This 2021 is the crucial year for Global warming. Speaker is telling about the Global warming situation around the world, as per Paris agreement all countries need to have a decrease in temperature 2'C; however
, the temperature decrease a 1. 5'C. It's a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
still
, If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 countries are releasing more and more carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. The European Union, The United States of America, South Africa, and China have achieved this target. All of this data has been collected
 on 1st June 2021 from Climate Action trackers. 