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nature is beauty of world

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In this session, I am discussing nature. God has given nature as a gift to human life, therefore humans are responsible to take care of it. Various birds and animals are living with nature and they have been always helping us. Nature is created by God, so everyone should love nature. From getting up early in the morning till night where we encounter nature in various forms. Season is one such example in which we come across nature.
In this session, I am discussing
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nature
. God has
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given
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nature
as a gift to human life,
therefore
humans are responsible to take care of it. Various birds and animals are living with
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nature and
they have been always helping us.
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Nature
is created
by God,
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so
everyone should
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love
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nature
. From getting up early in the morning till night where we encounter
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nature
in various forms. Season is one such example in which we
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come
across
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nature
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IELTS essay nature is beauty of world

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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