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Globally, most of people waste the foods from restaurants and shops which I cannot agree. Because, there are plenty of humans who do not have a single item to eat. The essay will discuss the few suggestions which help to minimize the throw of foods. As a trend, wastage of foods has been gone rapidly in some countries while some citizens do not have sufficient foods even to full fill their basic needs. Therefore, I do not support to people who waste the remaining foods items than giving to the needy people. Specially, foods stalls have shown the size of problem of wastage which to be addressed very fast by the authorized persons and relevant institutions. For example, a fine to be charged to the individuals who wastes the large scale of extra foods. A vital factor is improvement of fast foods in the society which cannot be kept more days. In addition, the world faces a major problem very soon which is shortage of foods in several countries. This situation will be strongly affected to the places where poor people live. In order to bring down number of wastage, various type of solutions can be identified. Mainly, rules and regulations against to the food wasters to be introduced in globally which to be followed by all governments. On the other hand, special programs to be developed in locally where additional foods to be distributed among the needy people than just throwing. For example, local society can collect the foods from shops and arrange free delivery. To conclude, restaurant and shops should stop the wasting of additional foods and need see the possible ways of implementing to minimize the wastage. I too agree to suggestions where both parties of government and shop owners agree for food waste mechanism which is created the best effective food management system. Implementing government mechanism
Globally, most of
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people
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waste
the
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foods
from restaurants and
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shops
which I cannot
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.
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Because
, there are
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plenty
of humans who do not have a single item to eat. The essay will discuss the few suggestions which
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help
to minimize the throw of foods.

As a trend,
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wastage
of
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foods
has
been gone
rapidly
in
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some
countries while
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some
citizens do not have sufficient
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foods
even to full fill their basic needs.
Therefore
, I do not support to
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people
who
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waste
the remaining
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foods
items than giving to the needy
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people
.
Specially
,
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foods
stalls have shown the size of problem of
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wastage
which to
be addressed
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very
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fast
by the authorized persons and relevant institutions.
For example
, a fine to
be charged
to the individuals who
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wastes
the large scale of extra
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foods
. A vital factor is improvement of
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fast
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foods
in the society which cannot be
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kept
more days.
In addition
, the world faces a major problem
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very
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soon
which is shortage of
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foods
in several countries. This situation will be
strongly
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affected
to the places where poor
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people
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live
.

In order to bring down number of
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wastage
, various type of solutions can
be identified
.
Mainly
,
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rules
and regulations against to the
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food
wasters to
be introduced
in globally which to
be followed
by all
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governments
.
On the other hand
, special programs to
be developed
in
locally
where additional
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foods
to
be distributed
among the needy
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people
than
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just
throwing.
For example
, local society can collect the
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foods
from
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shops
and arrange free delivery.

To conclude
, restaurant and
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shops
should
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stop
the wasting of additional
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foods
and need
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see
the possible ways of implementing to minimize the
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wastage
.
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I too
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agree
to suggestions where both parties of
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government
and
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shop
owners
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agree
for
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food
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waste
mechanism which
is created
the best effective
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food
management system. Implementing
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government
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
mechanism
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IELTS essay Globally, most of people waste the foods from restaurants and shops which I cannot

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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